Freedom lies with loss
It sleeps with danger
For in searching to be free
I become a stranger
For I am lost to my reality
Far away from home
But I have finally reached
Where i am free to roam
Freedom lies with death
I seek that place of peace
For in the still of solitude
All my thoughts do cease
Wednesday, May 5, 2010
Freedom is Alone
Posted by trendywendy21 at 6:31 PM
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So...this is pretty well written dude. Not gonna lie. No wonder I think you're a writing genius!! Except when you leave letters out lol
Apparently, the vote is unanimous. This is good.
yes, it is rather humorous that Paula Nancy Millstone Jennings escaped Jocelyn, the beer wench. She seems to be the type that would get that.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paula_Nancy_Millstone_Jennings#Paula_Nancy_Millstone_Jennings_of_Greenbridge.2C_Essex
Oh shut up...just because I don't recognize every falsehood Andrew presents doesn't change my opinion.
Don't mock me Starlight :P (This is what I get for making fun of so many people today...hahaha)
I like your first two lines "Freedom lies with loss, It sleeps with danger." It's not only poetic but true. I looked up the chinese word for freedom which is 自由 pronounced "zi you," and it literally means self- cause or self-reason, which sounds.. independent? Lonely? Just thought it went well with what you were saying there. Wonderful writing. I enjoy your thoughts. ^_^
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