this one that i wrote is very interesting. i wrote it first, and then i decided that the lines were all mixed up. this is my first rendition.
Here I am, what's left I miss
Lost in agony over that last kiss
Why does it take so much out
My soul is left with so much doubt
Forget it.
Lose me, drop me, keep me not
You don't need anything to do with me
Hold me, embrace me, a love
I'm so confused
and the second rendition:
Here I am, what's left I miss
Lose me, drop me, keep me not
Lost in agony over that last kiss
You don't need anything to do with me
Why does it take so much out
Hold me, embrace me, a love
My soul is left with so much doubt
Forget it
I'm so confused
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
eeny meeny i wrote a poem!!!
Posted by trendywendy21 at 9:40 PM
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1 comments:
it's even cooler when I read it :)
took me couple times to really absorb the words
i think this is the best one you've shown me
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